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雅思写作小作文结尾怎么写才算好?

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雅思写作小作文结尾怎么写才算好?很多同学都觉得自己写作文会有虎头蛇尾的毛病,很多时候不知道在雅思写作的结尾应该怎么写?本文中北京朗阁小编就为大家总结一些比较好的雅思写作结尾供大家思考。

雅思写作小作文结尾怎么写才算好?很多同学都觉得自己写作文会有虎头蛇尾的毛病,很多时候不知道在雅思写作的结尾应该怎么写?本文中北京朗阁小编就为大家总结一些比较好的雅思写作结尾供大家思考。

 

 

 雅思写作小作文结尾怎么写才算好?请看这么一道题及其结尾:

 

  Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

 

  结尾1:

 

  Someone said safeguard of wild animals is a waste of resource, but I do not agree. It seems we would spend some time, wealth and manpower on this meaningless thing. Actually we also do this for human being ourselves. Let’s protect wild animals right now.

 

  评:结尾句话,是对于*给出的观点的转述,应放在文章开头就出现。结尾不是申明中心句,而应是对全文观点的总结。大作文要收的坚定有力,seems让文章显得说服力不足,meaningless跟全文观点相孛。后一句有喊口号的意味,不符合英语议论文的习惯,同样的意思可改换客观平实的文风收尾。

 

  结尾2:

 

  To sum up, we can not live without wild animals due to their profound effects on us. For this reason, we should try our best to protect them. Let’s remember one thing---- protecting wild animals is equivalent to protecting ourselves.

 

  评:双重否定表示强调,是英语议论文的常见手法,令结尾收的坚定有力。Profound effects深远影响很好地呼应了文中提到过的野生动物*护的意义,令文章浑然一体。作者的观点跟结尾1作者观点完全一样,但采用了平实的陈述口气,并用了书面的地道词汇,equivalent to ,是一个很不错的结尾。

 

  结尾3:

 

  Certainly, our diet cannot be without meat. There are living stocks, which can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce. Therefore, we need not to resort to wild animals, especially the endangered ones. To protect animals is to protect our living environment. Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals.

 

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