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剑14系列:剑14写作解析

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如果你要参加雅思考试,那么你一定要熟知剑14的存在,为了让雅思考生们能够收获好成绩,本文中小编就为大家来讲讲关于剑14中的写作解析!

 

 

 

Task  One

                   

1. 出题情况分析:

 

在剑14中,共包含以下四种小作文:饼图,混合图,流程和地图。详见图表解析:

 

Test

题型

类别

题目

Test 1

Pie chart

静态

The charts show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be  unhealthy if eaten too much

Test 2

Bar chart+

table

动态

The chart below shows the value  of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The  table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016  compared with 2015.

Test 3

diagram

流程

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

Test 4

map

地图

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

 

 

2. 《剑14》与《剑11》-《剑13》的不同之处:

 

剑桥雅思真题系列从《剑11》开始到《剑13》没有包含考官的 Model Answer。但是《剑14》这一部分又再度回归,Test 4 Writing Task 1摘录了一篇考官的范文,下面是考官对地图的描写:

 

Grange Park was opened in 1920, a rectangular area with access from Arnold Avenue on the north side and from Eldon Street on the south side. There was a fountain in the centre, with a stage for musicians situated centre left, a glasshouse to the right of the Eldon Street entrance and a pond for water plants in the north east corner opposite. Around the edges of the park there were rose gardens, with seats nearby for people to smell the flowers and listen to music.

 

The park has altered considerably since then. Now there is one large-ish rose garden, occupying the central area where the fountain stood, and with seats all around it. One of the smaller rose gardens remains on the north side of the park. The bandstand (stage formusicians) also has been replaced, by an amphitheatre for concerts and associated seating. The glasshouse has gone and in its places is a waterfeature; similarly, where the pond for water plants stood there is now a children’s play area with a cafe nearby. Access to the park is still via the two original entrances, but there is now a third entrance near the water feature from an underground car park.

 

Despite the apparently significant changes, the park retains the basic elements of flowers, water, seating and music, with the addition of a cafe and a children’s play area. (236 words)

 

和《剑10》salmon那篇流程图一样,这位考官也没有写开头段,直接开门见山写作。分段思路也很清晰:1920年情况一段,现在的情况一段。这种分段思路也是比较清晰,简单的,但是要注意在第二段写出变化情况。本文一共用了10句话,除了第二段的过渡句外,其余每句话的信息都非常多,也提示各位考官在写作时尽量避免写短句,注意信息之间的合并。

 

 

3. 2019年1-5月小作文考情分析:

 

2019年以来,柱图的考察是最多的,多达7次;其次是表格,考察了4次;饼图考察了2次;而地图,流程和线图各1次。

 

题型

考试时间

柱图 7

1.51.173.23.94.64.134.17

线图1

5.18

饼图3

1.122.235.11

表格4

1.262.142.163.14

地图1

1.19

流程图1

3.23

组合图0

 

 

不难发现,柱图的考察暂时高居榜首,在接下来几个月的雅思考试里,线图的出现频率可能会增加,5-6月备考的考生可多多关注。

 

 

Task Two

 

1. 出题情况分析:

 

在剑14中,共包含以下三种题型大作文:2次双边讨论类,1次观点类以及1次混合类。其中三次考试题目均为新题,而环境类话题的有相似真题,见图表下方标注:

 

Test

题目类型

题目

Test 1

Discuss both views and give your own  opinion

Some people believe that it’s best to  accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.  Others argue that it’s better to try and improve such situations.

Test 2

Discuss both views and give your own  opinion

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants  and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Test 3

To what extent do you agree or  disagree

Some people say that music is a good  way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

Test 4

Reasons+ advantages &disadvantages

Nowadays, many people choose to be  self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization.

 

剑桥test1, 3, 4都是新题,分别考察了抽象类,音乐类以及工作类的话题。另外《剑14》中传统大话题的考察频率比较低,只有test2涉及到环境类问题,而之前考官们所钟爱的“教育类”“科技类”“政府类”题目并没有在剑14中出现。需要注意的是test2出现的“环境类”问题也加入了环境大类下的细节情境,test3也出现了对领域和年龄的限定,出题更偏爱细分点。

 

与剑桥C14-2-2相似历年真题如下:

①There are many extinct animal species in the world nowadays. Some people say we should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both opinions and give your personal view. (2011-7-9)

 

②Some people hold that we should spend amount of money and time on the protection of wild animals while others suggest that the money should be spent on human populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2019-2-23)

 

 

2. 2019年1-4月大作文话题分析:

 

类别

次数

社会类

5

媒体类

4

科技类

2

政府类

1

教育类

1

工作类

2

 

今年的雅思考试出现了两次旧题回顾:

 

① 2019年1月12号考题:

There are more new towns nowadays. It is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 和 2016年4月16号考题一致。

 

② 甚至今年5月18号大作文考题和3月2号考题一致:Employers should give staff at least four weeks of holidays a year to make employees do better in their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

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